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catelin ([personal profile] catelin) wrote2001-02-14 10:12 pm

Mmmmmmm...Erotica

Just got some poetry published here.

[identity profile] razorart.livejournal.com 2001-02-14 09:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Love them all, but especially the first one! A sensory delight! Loved the juxtaposition of details/metaphors.
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[identity profile] catelin.livejournal.com 2001-02-15 08:42 am (UTC)(link)
That's my favorite of the three as well. : )

[identity profile] strike-anywhere.livejournal.com 2001-02-15 02:28 am (UTC)(link)
they all were great, but I really loved the last one.

[identity profile] blackhellkat.livejournal.com 2001-02-15 05:33 am (UTC)(link)
OOoh I loved them all. My favorite was Paris 1950! Pretty darn sexy woohoo?

Not really very good

[identity profile] verian.livejournal.com 2001-02-15 12:16 pm (UTC)(link)
is not a description that could be given to these poems.
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Re: Not really very good

[identity profile] catelin.livejournal.com 2001-02-15 01:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahaha!! STOP DOING THAT TO ME!!

Re: Not really very good

[identity profile] verian.livejournal.com 2001-02-15 01:33 pm (UTC)(link)
What? That was a perfectly legitimate sentence.