The narrator can certainly make or break a story. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. I wrote this as a gentle nudge to a bear who reads my journal once in a while. I think he's lost in the forest, still trailing the scent of hope that he whiffs on the air from time to time...but perhaps he'll save himself. You never know. As for this story, I've written all that I can for now. : )
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Date: 2001-07-10 07:56 am (UTC)